I broke the drum kit

Ohhhhhh me likey haha

Thank you! I'll have to do that! Well, she acts and does things like a girl version of Michael so someone that has colorful hair and is addicted to videos games

Ok I really like it! However, I think you should bring Luke's emotions in a little more slowly, let them develop more naturally, and then have Bella's develop with his. It's always easy to show a character's development by adding a chapter or two with their P.O.V. but since Bella doesn't talk you can just have Luke speak his mind whenever their together. But great writing overall!! P.S. Who do you imagine Bella looking like?

Ok sorry it took me so long to read it, but I really like it! You use a lot of descriptive language and I like the plot too! Fun fact: I look like Tessa ;)

OMG OF COURSE! IM HONORED THAT YOU ASKED

Thank you so much!