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@icantfind_me yes the plot need to be umm.. untangled a bit. It has turned complex in places. But overall it's a catchy one and offcourse must be poly. It is meant to be. I wish you will finish the story. I'm wholeheartedly waiting to gulp it down 

apparently, my comsec might become my ranting place:)

@icantfind_me I would love to get the next part of this and please can you atleast do  minor editing in the story it's really confusing sometimes !!!

@niyavas dw bae I actually get your point and I'm not offended coz u r stating facts (even I am unsatisfied with that and I'm also perplexed why it gathered too much reads). Thank you for the review this helps alot!! I'm actually already working on all the plot holes rn. Looking forward for the reactions and reviews after I uploaded and finished the revisioned version ┌⁠|⁠o⁠^⁠▽⁠^⁠o⁠|⁠┘⁠♪

@icantfind_me hiii, so i loved the story however there are some things i would love to suggest:-
            First, that the title is villainess wants to marry but her feelings about love and marriage aren't highlighted that much
            The feelings that are highlighted are much of anxious and helplessness 
            Like when she first arrived she said that she could handle things as she is employee of the year blah blah but there are very few moments of her taking lead
            I mean I know this is a dream for her so messy but I think what she is feeling or she wants to do should happen cuz at last it's her dream
            Second, multiple povs like I know it's dream but that really confuses about the actual concept you are initiating 
            One pov ig it's enough 
            Third, tho in my opinion dream arc could be lengthen shorten or the chapter afterwards could be lengthen longer 
            Fourth, I feel like feeling of other characters except protagonist are very much monotonous or unexplained like i really couldn't understand what they are actually 
            I mean in dream it's quite understandable but afterwards it becomes confusion also about protagonist actions like having such a loving family why she wants to run, what was her trigger point, why the ml acted coldly with her despite being obsessed 
            Also i feel like ml growing obsession with fl is very less explained like it was very fast forward failed to capture the impact
            Lastly, I love the concept and story 
            It's really unique 
            Kudos to you pls this is seriously constructed criticism solely 
            Loveee

@icantfind_me I after block happens to everyone at some point but you keep pushing through. I just read the most recent chapter of  “I became the villians wife” and it was so funny and so well written. The female lead is hilarious that I find myself laughing out loud  keep up the great work. even if it takes a while to post the next chapter I will be anxiously waiting for your future work. -a super fan ♥️♥️♥️

@Ming1857 thank you so much for the support and positive feedback !! tho I'm surprised some of u liked my story, I'm also apologizing for the bad end because I am constantly experiencing mental/writer's block and always runs out from ideas QAQ

@icantfind_me I'll check it out soon 

@fnchshiiii late but thank u very much gurlll(⁠*⁠˘⁠︶⁠˘⁠*⁠)⁠.⁠｡⁠*⁠♡

@Adivonna thank u very muchhh, this comment means so so much to me
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