Iccy Strawberry

Hello!
          
          The cover for your story is pretty good! I like the protagonist’s character design. Is he black with natural hair? I can’t see it clearly.
          
          At the moment I don’t have time to read the whole story but I read the first two paragraphs & it’s decent. It’s easy to read, which is good. 
          I will most likely come back to give more constructive criticism.
          
          I can see that you’re struggling to get feedback in here. Let me recommend you YoungWritersSociety! U’re very likely to get reviews for your work! 
          The reason is: because they have a system there were everyone must review other work before publishing their own. Plus, there is specific section for new works & if users review work from that section they will receive more points!
          So new stories with no likes won’t be overshadowed!
          
          Have a nice day.

Thanks for the follow love❤️
          
          Plz don't unfollow now because some people do
          
          Hope you have a good day ☺️

Chapter 8 just got finished, don't forget to comment, vote and give feedback please. Thank you, I hope you enjoy very much.

Chapter 7 is out pls go read and give feedback so that I can improve the story
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Chapter 7 is out pls go read and give feedback so that I can improve the story
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Just uploaded chapter 6. Don't forget to comment, give some feedback and vote. Thank you

Just uploaded chapter 6, don't forget to give some feedback, comment and vote. Thank you

Just uplauded chapter 6, please go read, comment and vote so that you can support me. I would also appreciate it if you could give me feedback, thank you

New chap coming in soon

Hello! Thank you so much for following me! I really appreciate it and hope you'll enjoy my work! ^_^