icehot

Hi there! How are you? :D

I just wrote my first REAL story. 
          Can you please check it out.
          It's only two pages at the moment,
          because i don't want to keep going if it's not good.
          Let me know what you think please :)! 
          
          It's called 'What a Jerk"
          I love your writing, and your advice would really mean alot to me.

can you please read my story; the blood red stone.?
          thanks you so much if you do, and if you don't, good luck with your work :)
          but please do. :P
          ~blanketfort

Hey! I was wondering if you would check out a few of my stories or a piece of poetry; if you have time. If you enjoy it maybe become a fan. Comment on your opinion tho. because I would love to hear it. It would mean a lot to me. Thanks! 
          
          Have a great day. 
          
          <3 ~Undescribable~ ~Faith~ <3 xo
          

Thanx to all the peepz who took out tym to leave a comment and vote....
          I'm gonna keep the story going for the moment and We'll see how it goes
          love u all loaddsss xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

i love ur story!!!!! itsz awesum and hass good potentail!!!!

keep writing ...i love it lol!!!!!dont stop now i want to know how the story continues plz :D and its an awesome story 

im so craving munchies at the moment * okay that was totally random
          
          MAIN MESSAGE 
          
          Guys if you don't comment i won't knw what im doing right n wots goin wrng 
          both positive and negative critisims are wellcome - i can improve my writing with you help 
           
          THAKNS N MUNCHIES ROCK wooooohooo