@annaliqiao hello~ i just read it and i think that your story is coming on really nicely :D personally, my take on lesbian relationships is that there's a lot more emotions in it that you would ever find in hetero relationships or gay ones. so for me, i would say that your story is very interesting and i like the different kinds of emotions that you have explored. from unfamiliar strangers to friends and more, i think the character development was pretty good, but maybe just a bit too rushed. (although lesbian relationships do move rather quickly haha) it was a problem that i realised in the plot of my own fanfic that she developed feelings too quickly and abruptly which is why i rewrote it oof. hmmm also it did get a bit confusing as to who was talking at some points but other than that, it's really really good! i'm sorry my advice is uh kinda lame but it's all my personal thoughts and i hope it will be of help to you :) •̀.̫•́✧ jiayous and also thank you for asking me (uh sorry i'm so awkward)
