_lianoviyana

Hai kaka. Mampir ke cerita aku yuk. Kasi kritik dan saran ya ka. Soalnya ini cerita pertama ku. Judulnya Osis Nerd Namun Galak❤. Jangan lupa vote and comeent juga yaa. Cerita nya seru loh kak.
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ichiharu

@LianOviyana02 btw saran ya nih, judulnya kurang greget. Mending judulnya yang mengacu pada tema atau plot cerita, atau yang sedikit clichè.
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Sara_Amin

hello, do would checking out my new book 'Powerless Love" !! Please do if you have free time! Thanks!!

ichiharu

@Sara_Amin hey, i just read it. So far, it's good. I like the way you bring up the setting, but(i think) the way you bring the plot was little bit pushed up and it's making the story little bit forced with the plot. It was just my opinion, but good job, keep it well :)
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