scoobywhatever

Omg! Thank you so much!

ickledindigo

@scoobywhatever THANK YOUU! And it's fine, you can change it if you want, and yeah the ability name was a bit random, but I'm happy u liked it :D!! But don't rush to finish the story ofc!! Do it when ur ready,, but thank you for taking time to read my suggestion!! :))
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scoobywhatever

Feel free to give me some other ideas(if u want ofc!)
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scoobywhatever

This is a really good plot! I could make some parts of it work, but I feel like some of the bits clash a bit with the original storyline. In chapter one it was revealed that chuuya has a mission to kill dazai(and that’s when they’re already in a relationship). The rest of the chapters starts from 6 months apart from chapter 1's timeline. So if Dazai had a similar mission, it would change the ending I’ve planned. (Also, the ability truth that undoes deceptive words is genius!)
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