@kaja25659 well tbh i think MY story is cringe, so honestly part of the reason why u feel that way could just be a lack of self-confidence. but the advice i can give is to use a variety of different sentence structures so it doesn’t sound repetitive, learn how to use proper punctuation, and don’t use TOO many big/fancy words but throwing them in here and there(where they fit well) can be helpful. also, describing things is super important. you don’t want to OVERLY describe everything, but describing things that are important is very helpful. also, for dialogue: if you can’t imagine someone actually saying that to you/someone else, don’t write it. that’s all i can think of. good luck!!