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hey, i wrote a short story for a writing contest. If you could read it and maybe give me some feedback that would be great. I could read some of yours too!
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Your message was really strong and I totally agree with everything your talking about. Im not sure how I feel about the 'flood' but I do agree that it is a perfect metaphor for the world we are living in. That how we treat the environment and others is going to bite back at us unexpectedly, leaving us with nowhere else to go. I also think you've done a great job in expressing that we can stop the 'flood'. If we work together to change our ways. Overall I really enjoyed your work! - Isy
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