ignorantpenguin

Thank you for helping me! I changed it up a little bit but I didn't want to change it that much. This story is not going to be a cliché bad boy story. I have a great idea for it and on order to use it, I have to keep it this way. But thank you :) 

Hi there. I read your story Undercover Love, and I must say it was a bit cliche. She's really rich and claims that she's ugly all because she has brown hair and eyes, when really brown eyes are beautiful just like any other. She seems like a Mary Sue. Maybe if you edit this and switch the story up so nobody will read a book like every other bad boy book on here. I like your style though, this story has some pontenial.