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writingmaniac321
@igotafatcatnamedlola omg i just read it and can i just say that it was SUPER cute?? like omg awawawwww i liked it! I'd say try to separate out who's talking more (make different paragraphs) as that's much easier to read for the readers :) great job honey bun :D