I would love to see you finish A beast of beauty, Nova blue needs a break. Right now she is stuck with a dragon and she doesn’t know why? The teleportation thing is supposed to be a snap of Dom’s fingers, you have her stuck in between. She would not be happy about that. She has been snarling at Dom for a long time now. You know how the first ride went, i cant imagine what she has cooked up for Dom by now. She has had a lot of time to prefect what would be the perfect way to get back at him. Are you stalling to keep Dom safe just a little longer. Nova’s going to get the upper hand one day.
Beauty of the beast needs a touch up, Sadie needs refining into a lovable quirky human, not just annoying as Nova would say. Balthazar doesn’t quite fit with the description, he lost his edge the minute he met Sadie. Its like he lost his animal, like he turned human, if that makes sense. Or maybe he acts like two different people. The predator around others and the human around Sadie. Kind of had me confused about him. Nova Blue is who had me keep reading till the end.
Im not sure any of the above made sense, but i pick those two.