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my name jeff heres a poem i made
it's a prototype

The Relentless Seas of Struggle

The relentless seas of struggle,
Cause nothing but endless trouble,
It will make you weep,
As you fall into the never ending deep.

You gasp for air,
Realizing life isn't fair,
As you claw at the waves,
The hope inside of you starts to fade.

And so the relentless seas of struggle,
Caused nothing but endless trouble,
It made you weep,
as you fell into the never ending deep.

pls tell me if i have things to improve on, i don't write poems a lot