mal

Hey Mal!! I learned that you write jizzie stories extremely well, I am just wondering if you can critique my book? Its also fanfic and maybe has a sprinkle of jizzie?? 
          
          
          Here's the link Mal: https://my.w.tt/UiNb/mHhlvrLGSG
          
          
          
          
          Have a wicked day!! 

"Let's blow this popsicle stand,"

"Or the day that you showed four peoples where the bathrooms are,"