iijv_8

5k+ are you kidding me?? Im so happy rn 

noneyknw

any wp book recommendations similar to this one? i’ve reread it 4 times now

iijv_8

I’m trying so hard to finish book 2 but i physically can’t with the amount of school work I have it’s actually driving me crazy 
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keijiis

PLEASE LMK IF U HAVE ANY
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sneakychaos

I just finished your book and ohmygod
          - I was screaming at chapter 36 of how well written it was I kid you not I had to take a lap around my room when I read the confession, your an incredible writer I’m so excited for Sara’s story I want you to be the greatest so here’s my feedback 
          -you mentioned once that she blew the soup before she gave it to Khalid but it’s actually sunnah in Islam not to blow on food and giving her culture and religion it would make sense.
           
          actually that’s all lol
          anyways I’m really excited for saras story PLEASEE ADD FORCED PROXIMITY!!
          thankss

iijv_8

THANK YOU, I thought about that actually and i decided to put it mainly because Sunnah is something as we know “Praised for being done but not punished for not doing” so it’s fine if a few Muslims didn’t do it, I was trying to showcase how we do fallow our religion but during moments of worry and fear we tend to forget them (Jenna was worried about Khalid to the extent she wanted him to eat and gather energy faster yk?) ANYWAY TY FOR THE FEEDBACK BABYYY
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heavenskn0ws

I freaking loved your story. the writing was just wow I'm so speechless rn. jenna was so badass I loved her and I loved the way you wrote her character. and khalid's character raised my standards soooo high I need a man like him. 
          I honestly loved this book so much!!!!

iijv_8

Omg literally TY IM SO GLAD U ENJOYED IT 
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keijiis

call me crazy but i had to physically stop myself from finishing the story the same sitting i started reading bc of how good it was??? im sorry if i spam here but i actually have to express how life changing reading this book was. like. i wish i could bottle up the feeling it gave me and carry it around forever. it was so much more than just a book—i felt like i was experiencing this. the characters felt real in that quiet, aching way where you miss them before you’re even done. the writing??? disgusting. unfair. how dare you be that good?? how dare you ruin every other book for me?? i don’t know how to move on from this and honestly, i don’t want to. i want to reread it for the first time over and over and over. this book didn’t just raise the bar, it launched it into orbit. thank you for ruining my life in the best possible way. the pacing? impeccable. the emotional beats? life changing. the amount of times i had to stop and just stare at a sentence like. how do i go back to real life after reading that. i could write a dissertation on every line, every pause, every breath between words. this story made me fall apart and put me back together in ways i didn’t even know i needed. i genuinely feel like a different person now. not to be dramatic, but i’ll be measuring time as before and after reading this. i’m going to be thinking about this for days. weeks. maybe years. the chokehold it has on me is actually embarrassing. and if you think i’m not going to bring it up in every conversation from now on? WRONG. this book is my entire personality now. LITERALLY THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS!!!

iijv_8

IM IN TEARS???? Omg im actually crying TYSMMMMMMMMM FOR YOUR WORDSSS. Dw I literally already have the draft for book 2 ready and i plan on re uploading book 1 professionally so bare with me suger
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keijiis

BA9EE7 I LOVED YOUR BOOK SO MUCH, the details? the advanced vocabulary use? the plot? the pacing? the characters background stories? LITERALLY NO FLAWS; your book changed me as a person and i really hope you write more!!!
          
          u also sound like a really cool person and we probably could be friends 

iijv_8

Sry I just saw this??? u kidding id love to be your friend 
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leonspookiee

dare i say this was so beautifully written? it conveys the right type of emotions, maybe thoughts that most of us had. the feelings, the rage the happiness all of that was described in ways i felt it. 
          
          i loved the book! i would suggest one thing tho make the male lead next time more traditional so it’s more realistic. 
          
          cause this made me start day dreaming and literally consider getting traditionally (arranged) married. 

leonspookiee

no need to thank me!! 
            
            but like i said i love the male lead, it’s just he lacked that saudi tradition and that’s what was what made me like spiral. so if you were to write another book potray the male lead as a more traditional man, to which then he softens up…it’s the perfect representation for how marriages are here. 
            
            i loved the book sm its one of my favs now, but its just that part it got me day dreaming in a way where honestly arranged marriage doesn’t sound that bad anymore 
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iijv_8

Dare i say your comment just made my day? TY truly from the bottom of my heart! I love your feedback and if you have anymore please do tell because this is only the first draft of my book which later on i plan to publish officially. TY AGAIN 
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