ijustwantspaghetti

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Question: Would you read this?
          	
          	 Mara, a girl who killed her own mother when she had just come out of the whome, and killed her father seconds after. It wasn't her fault tho. She didn't want this gift to kill with a single touch, she didn't want to grow up in a cell, she didnt want to be called a moster or a tool for war, but thats what she got. Locked up away from the outside world. The only way she could escape was by reading. And one day while she is reading something appears in her cell. No one EVER go's into her cell. She looks up from her book and see's a very tall person. He is handsom yet dark, and even though he could die from her touch he looks completly calm at the sight of her. When she asks who he is, he reaches out his hand for her to take. No fear in his eyes at all. This makes her jump back not wanting to kill him, but he reaches further...
          	
          	I don't know if I'm going to put this story up or not because I usually don't put my stories online but what do you think. Boring? Interesting? Dumb? Let me know. And yes I know my writing is horrible but for some reason when I have great ideas for a story I just can't put it into words making it sound completly idiotic and complicated but bear with me. 
          	

chbTurtles

@ijustwantspaghetti I don’t mean the whole thing, I just mean the beginning is shatter me. Some readers might get mad. I’m totally into it, I’ll read it if you post it. 
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ijustwantspaghetti

@chbTurtles dont spoil shatter me i was gonna read it!!!! But no listen this dude that she meets is from hell and he is the grim reaper so she can touch him and he is actually good and he comes down for her because his father is the demon king who want to use her for war but the reaper demon prince (havent decided so much yet) is gonna get protective after he falls in love with her
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chbTurtles

I am interested in anything you have to write, but I thought I’d just... yeah, sorry.
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ijustwantspaghetti

this message may be offensive
Question: Would you read this?
          
           Mara, a girl who killed her own mother when she had just come out of the whome, and killed her father seconds after. It wasn't her fault tho. She didn't want this gift to kill with a single touch, she didn't want to grow up in a cell, she didnt want to be called a moster or a tool for war, but thats what she got. Locked up away from the outside world. The only way she could escape was by reading. And one day while she is reading something appears in her cell. No one EVER go's into her cell. She looks up from her book and see's a very tall person. He is handsom yet dark, and even though he could die from her touch he looks completly calm at the sight of her. When she asks who he is, he reaches out his hand for her to take. No fear in his eyes at all. This makes her jump back not wanting to kill him, but he reaches further...
          
          I don't know if I'm going to put this story up or not because I usually don't put my stories online but what do you think. Boring? Interesting? Dumb? Let me know. And yes I know my writing is horrible but for some reason when I have great ideas for a story I just can't put it into words making it sound completly idiotic and complicated but bear with me. 
          

chbTurtles

@ijustwantspaghetti I don’t mean the whole thing, I just mean the beginning is shatter me. Some readers might get mad. I’m totally into it, I’ll read it if you post it. 
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ijustwantspaghetti

@chbTurtles dont spoil shatter me i was gonna read it!!!! But no listen this dude that she meets is from hell and he is the grim reaper so she can touch him and he is actually good and he comes down for her because his father is the demon king who want to use her for war but the reaper demon prince (havent decided so much yet) is gonna get protective after he falls in love with her
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chbTurtles

I am interested in anything you have to write, but I thought I’d just... yeah, sorry.
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