mercy123454321

Hi Kait, I'd really appreciate it if you could take a look at my story 
          "Can I Have This Dance?"
          If you could comment, whether it's good or bad, you'd be helping me alot. However if you like it, i hope that you could vote or even become a fan.
          Any type of criticism would be useful
          Please and Thank you
          Mercy :)

mrjay2010

Ya'll done took my story,kIM'S jOURNEY OF a liIFETIME from like #634 to #233 to now, #208 on the HOT LIST!!!!!!!!!! 2 MY READERS AND ESPECIALLY MY FANS:P,THNX A MILLION N GOD BLESS! 
          
          p.s.Now let's get it to the top 100!!!!so I can mark another one of my wattpad goals, you can help do this by advertising my story:Kim's Journey OF A Lifetime on your walls,@ the end of your stories and to your fans! please and I appreciate you!

sammy44680

hi! i was wondering if you would plz check out chapter 8 of my story 'Angels and Death' and plz comment to let me know what you think, maybe even vote and fan also! it would mean a great deal to me, and here is the link:http://www.wattpad.com/479920-chapter-8 its #1 on the leadership boards of the watty awards! 
          
          its about a guardian angel named caspian, who was suposed to let his charge samantha die, but did not. he believes she is destined for greatness and now it is his soul porpuse to prove so. but his rebellion and lack of faith in his father the lord will cost him severly. plz check it out!

mrjay2010

hey thnx 4 reading n fanning me!!! n prob d reason u havent got very manry reads is because, hello???? no tags!!!!!!!!! you need catchy tags like,ugly, beautiful,girl,love,mean,etc! tags attracts readers from searches and what-nnot. please take my advice n add ssome tags and PLEASE UPLOAD  another chap. n p.s. im sorry this a real life story about you but be happy with who you are n love yourself!!! y? God Loves you! p.s. i sent you a private msg!

mrjay2010

hEY, im so you glad you liked my poem( : will you pls read my story: Kim's Journey Of A Lifetime and please PLEASE COMMENT! IT'S like #259 on the What's Hot List! if u like, vote,fan me, THIS MEANS ALOT 2 ME! 
          and if u don't, THNX N GOD BLESS anyway...but i hope u do!