@ilanit1997
@ItsMe__ thanks you for taking time of your your day to read and review^^ i will try using all the thing you mentioned farther along :) i am working on a new chapter so i would hope to get more critic from you:D @OwainGlyn thanks! @CarolinaC soon i hope.i have to just sit one day and let all my emotions go and focus on the chapter:P
It was a very cute story. Let me know when you update!
I am very happy that you have 'followed' me although I don't know why. I am delighted to return the compliment.
@ilanit1997 Hiya! Thanks for asking me to read your story. It actually did take a minute :) I love the beginning of the story already and I can't wait for the next chapter. I don't think you should change a lot, but you should definitely write more because I was interested, and I thought it was short. The chapter though definitely brought the audience in. I hope in your following chapters, you would have twists with Hazel and Noel, as it would definitely interest the reader. You could also end in suspense and have a variety of sentence and paragraph lengths but overall, I'm enjoying the chapter a lot. Thanks again. I hope this would help, but at the end of the day, it's your decision whether it's good or not. I can't wait for more! Love, ItsMe__
I am a ninja
@screwgravity Haha I am both and I am also Russian Dont worry I am not ashamed by it or anything ^_^
@closet_anarchist i really liked your story u deserve that and more^^
Hey, thanks for fanning me! I really appreciate it!
