lauraaapp

Hello! Could you read the beginning of the story I am doing and give a brief opinion? I would like that very much, thank you very much

lauraaapp

Thank you so much!❤
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ilie1234

@ lauraaapp  Thank you, I appreciate for taking my opinion in consideration. I've read the beginning of your story and I would like to say that you are doing great. Other than the commas ,that sometimes are missing, I didn't notice any grammar fails yet, so your  story is doing pretty good. I wish you good luck ❤.
            P.s you got a new follower 
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