ilocanotribe

Isang pasada lang kaibigan, hugot ng pusong sugatan. https://www.wattpad.com/story/203630783

MimieDuvivier

A little piece of advice, when writing a story make sure you tie all the loose ends. You never said why she left the first time and you rushed to much with the story, it could have been a good story but it lacks a certain je ne said quoi.

ilocanotribe

@MimieDuvivier thanks! I appreciate the tip... actually there's so much running in my head and i find it difficult to put them together.
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