@Diana_akikawa there where paragraphs I did make them and I don't understand quotation marks hiw to put a period or an exclamation mark or a question mark
@Diana_akikawa I didn't describe them so you could use your imagination of what they look like to me they don't look like anything there just characters in a book
@Diana_akikawa I'm a grammar Nazi. and your book didn't have
•paragraghs, it was all blended in.
•quotation marks " " when people spoke.
•please describe the people. I can't see them like you do in your head.