can someone pls tell me if this actually is good or if im having tunnel vision;
Clouds patched over the sky with colors of greys and blues. The world below the humongous cumulus’ was a contrasting blur of oranges and warm whites. Down in the large antique mid-nighteenth-century venue, between laughs, gossip being spilled, and the hostess and his women; were two lovers covered in cool tones of viola and twilight. In a corner shrouded in butterflies and a lake ever so pristine, the two figures danced, serenaded not by the band inside but by the sounds gifted only by Mother Nature. The wind rustled, the insects buzzed, and now and then; they’d meet—a deep kiss blooming.
He whispered sweet nothings into her receiving ears, his voice cool and low. It aroused her, it drew her closer, and it strung her along through the night. Her body—her movements, had just seemed to complete his. She was ever moving, her figure snaking from one part of the bridge to another. Clad in a simple white gown and a mask to suit the occasion she taunted and teased. He was simple and blunt; he never wavered. His black suit looked ever so perfect next to her outfit, his movements complimentary to her little leaps and twirls. He would catch her, he would kiss her; that was a fact.
