Tanu Khemani

Hello there!
          I've got a new book up that I've just started writing and I'm looking for some critique and am willing to critique in return... Please do help!
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/3821269-forgive-me-father-let-me-dance-chapter-1
          
          Think is the link and thank you in advance! :)

heyy your from india??
          glad to find you here..
          and i read your stories and looked interesting to me..

hi tanu 
          cn u please read my book 
          its a tribute to the victims of mumbai terror attacks 

hey really like ur work...whr in India r u frm?
          

@bubblesking1 ya!!!
          
          

oh my gosh you love the house of night series tooo????!!!!!

hi tanu !
          i see ur from india
          me too
          you will find many indians on my profile to interact with 
          can you please read my story ? (how my life passed in front of me in minutes)
          its a tribute to the victims of 26/11 mumbai terror attacks
          xoxo <3

Heyy do you by any chance want to read any of my stories???

Looks like I found you.. 
          Our first small talk didn't go very well. My comment wasn't supposed to sound insolent or offending or even upsetting, at the very least. It didn't come out well, I guess. I'd like to start with a fresh slate! :) 

India WON AGAINST PAKISTAN! WOOHOO, WAY TO GO INDIA! <3 <3