@im-a-bi-bish I'm enjoying the HP book you're writing. I can't wait for the next chapter.
And a word of advice, from one author to another, don't worry about the pace of the story, or any mistakes you miss before publishing a chapter. Writing is a skill that can only be acquired over time. No one is born with it, it is a talent learned over the years. The talent just gets better the more you write. It's all about practice.
So, even if you aren't happy with a chapter or scene, which happens a lot, you can still publish it. If you are worried about the pace, you can always skim over the events by explaining what happens, then go into the next events. Another idea is to keep what you have and just publish it. A story is always made up of slow and quicker paces.
I hoped this helped, feel free to message back, and I can't wait for your next chapter to come out.