Rayfell_

Now for my overall thoughts on the story!
          
          I think the relationship between Ash and Daisy is written in an incredibly realistic way, you can feel the depth in the writing. The characters aren't one-dimensional at all. Even though Daisy has this confident, dominant, capable businesswoman personality, we still get to see her moments of vulnerability and weakness, and I love that so much. At the end she's just a girl that's been manipulated by her father. And Ash and her share that bound of being traumatised by the same man.
          
          And with Ash, what can I say? It's been a long time since I've got so attached to a character. He is my hyper fixation of the moment. At first you might think he's just a carefree guy who doesn't really think too deeply about life, but the more you dig into his character, the more you realize he's been through truly horrible things that weigh heavily on him, and he's just really good at hiding it. Wich contrats with Daisy's personnality because she doesn't care about apparences (we love an unbothered queen). Also I have to say: Ash managed to change my sexual preference (just for him) what the hell. I was never into pegging before this story, I totally knew what it was, but it never attracted me seeing men this way (tbh it turned me off). But Ash is different, he's so cute, soft, flirty, feminine, fragile that you just want to see him moan under you. He's an exception to me.
          Apart from that, he's just triggers my maternal instinct, you want to keep me away from all the bad things in this world. He's so addictive! Good job author you really wrote him well!

Rayfell_

Hi 419, I hope you're doing well! I have a question and then I will share with you my opinion on your story. 
          My question is this : Since you mentioned Ash stopped taking viagra and his body has been able to grow a little more, and that even though he's still dealing with anorexia he seems to be doing slightly better in term of nourishment, I was wondering if that means he'll start to become a bit more dominant sometimes in his personality (since biology speaking testosterone would be acting up) especially in his relationship with Daisy, be it in bed or in everyday life ? While Daisy would more or less stay the way already in terms of their dynamic ? I'm not asking if Ash will change completely, hell I dont want that ! I like my cute boy like he is (being princess carried and more), but it would peak my interest even more if he would switch sometimes. I actually think it makes their relationship even more interesting when it's not always one-sided in terms of who takes the lead.
          So I was wondering what you had in mind for him? 
          
          Now, I'll share my overall thoughts on the story in another message!

Rayfell_

@im_419
            Thank you for your answer!
            
            Oh yeah, I can already see how Daisy will change for the worst (you started to hint at it), as for right now she still seems to keep it under control but jealousy and possessiveness seems to be things lurking in her heart and I just know it will explode at one point... I mean she never had anything for her so I can understand how it will come to that. But I just can't imagine how Ash will react... Will he try to escape from here ? Reject her? Or Will he just accept it like he did with Theodore?  Will he try to be a bit more agressive to make her understand he's not an object...  Be disapointed in her? Or maybe understand her? Damn, too much questions ! I will wait for the answers in the next chapters :)
            
             And Tysm for creating this wonderful story !
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im_419

@Rayfell_ He’ll change a bit, but not drastically. It’s gonna be more about internal changes than external ones. Basically, Ash always had a certain level of it, but since it was artificial, his own hormones and receptors got dulled. Testosterone isn't really a "dominance" hormone, it’s more about aggression (in vol. 3 u’ll see him before the pills, and he was a pretty difficult teen). In Ash’s case, he’ll just start taking more risks and more responsibility. Right now (as u might’ve noticed at the end of vol. 1), his emotions are all over the place, and not always in a good way, because he just can't handle them yet.
            
            ​His body is already formed by age 22, so it won’t change that much. Don't worry too much: his femininity and softness aren't going anywhere, but he might act pretty aggressive and sharp in certain situations.
            
            ​As for his dynamic with Daisy, it’s a bit more complicated. Daisy is the one who’ll start changing, but not necessarily for the better. I can’t really say how Ash is gonna deal with that yet, though. No spoilers  
            
            ​Tysm for reading my story!
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