im_that_girll1

So I rewrote chapter 5 and combined all the parts into one single chapter. Hope you like it...

im_that_girll1

What's the haps people? So I am very tired  but I am still trying to improve my story, please give me some things that you think that I can or should add or give me some ideas to use in chapter 3 don't worry I'll make sure that I tell the other readers that you were the lovely person who made a part to go into the chapter. You can do anything you want to do, just please help me out here!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!