What's the haps people? So I am very tired but I am still trying to improve my story, please give me some things that you think that I can or should add or give me some ideas to use in chapter 3 don't worry I'll make sure that I tell the other readers that you were the lovely person who made a part to go into the chapter. You can do anything you want to do, just please help me out here!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!