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@fallenanglegirl1213  for me to edit, ill need to have access to your wattpad aka password o you think you can give me that access? I promise I won't do anything but edit.

@fallenanglegirl1213 okay, I'll start tomorrow, I need some sleep seeming how its almost 12:30 at night here. I'll need access to the story though.

@fallenanglegirl1213 can I just edit tour story? .-.

@fallenanglegirl1213 I read it, and you need more detail and longer chapters. Nothing really caught my eye in the story. Also, its usually better to start straight with the story an have your character introduced slowly in the first few chapters. Make it interesting. Keep these things in mind and add it to your next story, or this one, whichever you'd like first.