sometimes i wish i could just leave things alone but i read comments because i like to comment to support & vote. it irks me when all these "perfect" ppl who've not created their own work or simply need to feel superior, pick at grammar. or find something wrong because it's not exactly like what it may have been inspired by. obviously it won't be! it's one thing to comment with constructive observations but f*ck all that noise. you writers are creating, publishing and being published. improve for your growth and not people's approval. i truly respect your crafts and hope you aren't ever downtrodden by these self-appointed critics. they aren't doing it. least of all in your unique ways.