Ruhi

I don't know why I was not able to reply in the comments section, but I wanted to let you know. So I am replying to you here. Dear, you started off soooo Good. Till the love confession, the gradual build-up between the main leads was amazing. For me what I loves the most is that in mostttt of the stories its always the fl who fells first especially in the type of genre (brothers best friend) you were writing in but for me it was the first time the ml was in love. I loved their character. But after the love confession chapter, i don't know if it makes sense, It was such a rush. If I am not wrong, the fl was 18 when the story started, as mentioned in the description, but then suddenly she was 22 in her birthday. You never mentioned a leap in the start, so I was so confused about the difference. Then the pub scenes and that guy who drugged her, I am not able to understand from where he even came from. I just felt that their was no connection after the love confession part. The story randomly started moving in different directions. You never mentioned that thier was a fight between the fl and her best friends but then in one of the parts she was writing letters to her friends saying she wishes they can forgive her for not telling them about the ml. Just before you mentioned she went to her friends marriage, then how come they are not talking. I don't know if I am making any sense, but I  felt that the story was just rushed after the confession. 

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