hello everyone my name is janna I have been writing for a while but this is my first time actually publishing what i write because I'm to much of a pussy to do it but anyhow hopefully you guys enjoy it. please review tell me what you think

here is an excerpt from the book

Love can be challenging to find in the mist of society and lust and everything else that comes with the territory, is like an animal trying to look for its next prey all the senses are alert, aware of the surroundings. The sharp green of the trees, the unruly wind swaying the immense trees back and forth, the wet soil on the paws, but then the animal catches a whiff of its prey, one look and it is determined to catch the next feed, that one thing that will save it from living another day. Whatever it takes, adrenaline pumping, paws moving faster to catch it, but there are so many obstacles, the prey is moving so fast, escaping farther and farther away. To me that is what love is; it seems like it is just a whisk of wind passing by. I know it exist, I know I could feel it, but I just cannot grasp it. I was awakening from my thoughts when my coworker Alicia with a shaken voice said, “Hello earth to miss. Starr.”