imarkanx
imarkanx
Supercondensed existential chaos
exoplanet solstice
A singularity sighs beneath xeno skies.
Here time loops sidereal,
as sublime reason dilates,
light forgets itself.
And meaning swirls like solar dust of
gravitational poetry caught in accretion.
IRL_IrenicJ
I'm excited to invite you to the 'Vintage Glamour' awards, a celebration of outstanding writing and creativity. The awards aim to recognize and honor talented writers, provide a platform for new voices, and foster a community of like-minded individuals. It would mean a lot to me if you could participate and share your work. Your talent and perspective would be a great addition, and I'm looking forward to seeing what you bring to the table.
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MythicQuill538
Hey! I have finished the Unevia book. Would you be open to read it and give me your feedback? I am aiming to get it published and any helpful feedback would obviously get a acknowledgement in the book once published.
MythicQuill538
@imarkanx Hey, yes, that is exactly what I'm after. If I made a decision on purpose, then I will always stick to that since I know you might not know the reason just yet. If something works for you or doesn't that's important for me to know. I already have a long list of revisions which I'm working my way through at the moment. I am able to take constructive criticism and appreciate honesty. Thanks for your consideration!
imarkanx
@MythicQuill538 sure I can do that. Do you have a timeline? I hope you don’t mind if my feedback is concise/focused. That at times might come across as rude but really it is just me being an editor and nothing personal. Revision feedback is intended to polish the story, and sone of my advice might simply be my own bias. No matter what criticism anyone offers, it remains your story and your voice. For example just because I might say “Oh but the room should be red for mythical symbolism.” That is just my opinion - unless that opinion resonates with your vision you should stick to your instincts about your story and your characters.
imarkanx
I deleted all my poems from here. Moved some to substack.
Just running a free stack. Find me here. https://imarkanx.substack.com/
I am lingering here to read and comment
imarkanx
Poetry. Distilling honest poetry makes you reweigh your soul every morning. Inside I am broken shards. They scatter at night when I’m dreaming. In morning light I sweep them back up. And see if I can balance the scales. Some morning I find extra pieces. I am measured by weight of my words and not by my volume.
Someone asked. What is the theme of your poetry. Theme? It is simply my soul oozing out. It is a collection of chaos. Words reshaped into fractals ever growing. It is a compulsion. I am insane in persisting. Yet I persist. OCD. Obsessive Creation Distilling.
imarkanx
Magical
ex nihilo
prestidigitation
mesmerizing
dazzling
delighting
frightening
from nothing
comes everything
bright arcs
swirling colours
flowing free
cooing doves
fluttering free
rabbits hopping
popping free
regal top-hats
random bric-à-brac
irresistible wonder
holding me here
fingers enticing
gently charming
the imagination
I willingly enthralled
within the spell of you.
JulieAnneJuanico
@imarkanx which book?
imarkanx
Well I was following 64 accounts and only 20 follow me. So I stopped following anyone not following me or not reading my content. Good luck folks.
imarkanx
Creeping Along
She enjoyed everything green,
her garden pure and pristine.
She planted ivy by the wall,
growing from spring into fall.
Bright berries, crimson red,
she tried one and fell over dead.
Gasping aloud at her demise,
“Such an unfortunate surprise.
Red was certainly delicious,
but green is clearly less pernicious!”
I’m looking for feedback on my poetry collection - drop by and give me your thoughts. It would be appreciated.