imjustsadalot

hello guys, i was wondering if you could check out my little story and give me feedback, anything helps. im new to this and i could really use some pointers

I was wondering if you can tell me which stories  are good and the ones that aren't. And also a list of great writers on here.  I already got a few but I just want to make  it a bigger list just in case the ones I already got told weren't good. Thank you for following back.