Shelley2594

hey you.......yes you looking at screen 
          
          im kinda a newbe it would mean alot to me if you could take a look at my story, i know that they arent grate cuz i just started writing....... 
          
          see if you could tell me what you REALLY think like what im good at and what i need work on that would help SO much....... 
          
          because all the people that have read it say like 'good work' or 'keep going' but that dont help me get better so i would be really thankful if you did this... 
          
          michelle

Davick

Could you please read my first book called Conjured? It's a supernatural fantasy about a thirteen year old boy named Chuck. He is going to find out that he's a very rare and gifted person with the ability to conjure up just about anything the heart can dream or imagine. He will have to risk everything to save our world and his hidden, magical world called Astrum. Also resting on his shoulders is the dire need to rekindle the magic that was completely destroyed everywhere nearly thirteen years ago. Join Chuck in an adventure of a lifetime along with his best friend Alex and his newfound magical companion, a Gremble named Chaos. Ultimate magic awaits you inside the spectacular world of Conjured! 
          Please read Conjured today. The first three chapters are now available on Wattpad! Please vote and comment.
          Thanks.     

vicky_nfs

Hey !!
          Just thought to let you know that I have a story for you to read, whenever you're bored to death and don't know what else to do.
          It's called "Carrying the way of the world" and I'd love to get some feedback :)
          I just uploaded chapter 11, so feel free to go read it and let me know what you think!
          Oh, and if you're interested, I have some poems too, well they're supposed to be poems anyway :D
          And I hope you upload some more of your story soon because I like it so far :)
          ~Vicky