Heyo everybody, I posted a story a little while ago and I would really appreciate feedback on the first chapter. If you're into demon familiars, witches, warlocks, and exorcists with daddy issues, feel free to check it out. It's one of my first stories I'm really proud to say that I wrote and I just really want to know what people think of it. It's called "Boy King". There's only a chapter, but I'm working on the second one at the moment.