immortal_soul_x

Hey, guys, I've got an idea for a story I might post up here and wanted your opinions first. Here's a little... blurb I guess :L
          	
          	Taylor Waters is one of The Agencies most elite agents, at only sixteen years old. She has been training for as long as she can remember, and has never set foot in a high school that doesn't require you to fight your teachers. But then Taylor, alongside with her best friend Harley, is given the chance to undergo her first mission, after passing the initiation test. And so they are on their way to high school, where they cannot let out their identity, or fall in love. So what happens when bad boy Jace shows up? Because the truth is, Love Is The Hardest Mission Of All.
          	
          	So what do ya think? Please reply :D

Dazzler

Heys, I love your storys!!! It would mean alot to me if you could checik out mine anf maybe become a fan it would mean alot from someone like you!! If your to busy or just dont want to i'll understand! Thanks for you time
          
          ~Dazzler

SilverLove

Hey there! I was wondering when you have the time can you please read a story of mine? Here’s four that I need some criticism on: 
          A New Maid And a Beautiful Bachelor Don’t mix!: romance/humor/ drama
          Evett Castillo finds herself working for one of the most handsome bachelors in England. The only problem though is the fact that he takes pride in making her life a living hell. 
          
          Life Inside White walls: supernatural / romance 
          At the tender age of five, she claims to see a man who she called her guardian angel. Now Felicia, sixteen and broken, is trapped in a highly secured mental hospital. What will happen when the angel turns out to be real? And what if this angel wasn’t truly what it seemed? 
          
          Never Meant To Be:  romance/ supernatural/ angels/demons/
          Cecilia Sophie was meant to marry a man she never met by her forceful parents, but that was the last straw. In the late of night she manages to run away from her home in hope of finding the freedom she longed for. Unfortunately though, that was the day when she realized some things aren’t meant to be. 
          
          "Beautiful Beautiful" fantasy/romance/ supernatural 
          Adora is a Halfling. With the blood of a shifter and witch running through her veins, she finds herself not welcomed in her village. Now on the run, she finds herself in the falling for the shifter Prince who that happens to rule over the Kingdom of the west. Seeing that he's looking for a mate and she has no place to go, what will happen between the two? 
          It would make my day if you could comment on how they are :) 
          Thank you, 
          -Silverlove
          

moongazerkai07

hi there. i was just wondering if it's ok to advertise my untitled vamp story and some poems over here on ur profile. if you have time to check them out, send me a message or comment on them. i'm still trying to improve my writing and thanks >_<

ann_o_nemos

Could you read my newest story? “I’m Body Guarding the President’s Jerk Son…Who is HOT! FML”. Comment and vote plz!
          
          Carly Dupont is not a normal seventeen-year-old girl. She works for her dad in his freelance organization called COBRA as a bodyguard. She trains hard and shuts everyone out of her world. After her mom’s death years ago, she’s never let anyone else in. 
          
          Her training is complete and her dad sends her off to be the bodyguard to the President’s son. She hasn’t seen him since she was seven, and like any jerk, he used to torment her with petty little tricks. But now she’s back and she’s stronger, faster, better.
          
          Yet he still has the inexplicable ability to make her feel like the weak little girl she used to be. Could he be the one to break her invisible wall?
          
          Welcome to her world of fists, politicians, assassins, high school, and even possible romance.
          

maryasha

hi, would you mind reading my story, i would love some constructive criticism and what you think about it
          
          "All Boy's School Survival Guide" for girls
          
          Synopsis:
          
          Aliza is in a binding situation, literally! With her breasts constricted, wearing her brother's loose clothing, and dropping her voice to the lowest level, she's attending Ascham, an all boy's school! If that's not enough, throw in an extremely hot roommate, who suspects Aliza, aka Alex, of not being exactly what "he" appears to be and you have a chaotic relationship---if you can even call it that.
          http://www.wattpad.com/257206-quot-all-boys-school-survival-guide-quot-for-girls

immortal_soul_x

Hey, guys, I've got an idea for a story I might post up here and wanted your opinions first. Here's a little... blurb I guess :L
          
          Taylor Waters is one of The Agencies most elite agents, at only sixteen years old. She has been training for as long as she can remember, and has never set foot in a high school that doesn't require you to fight your teachers. But then Taylor, alongside with her best friend Harley, is given the chance to undergo her first mission, after passing the initiation test. And so they are on their way to high school, where they cannot let out their identity, or fall in love. So what happens when bad boy Jace shows up? Because the truth is, Love Is The Hardest Mission Of All.
          
          So what do ya think? Please reply :D