Hi. I'm new and recently posted an original story HOW TO: Survive Inside this Forsaken World with Me!! After reading some of ur story, I would really like for u to offer some critique. No push though. If u do check it out, please give me advice on how to better my characters to make them stand out more, and make them more life like. I am really trying to become a better author, and any criticism is welcome. Also, I update it often, and post some related art (though its just quick sketchs and nothing to be proud of) of my ocs. No push!!