funvenom
I'd love to see this continued. Perhaps, in the non-existent sequel, we find out what traumatized her? Perhaps this brings back the painful memories? Brilliant story. I've read many Pj stories, and this one is by far the best. The way you describe and write things is unique and creative. Really hope for this to go on!!:)
improbablyyourfetish
Just realised I don't think I actually wrote that into the story, or did I. Not sure, if not then there you go extra info. I'm never sure what was in my head and what I wrote down.
improbablyyourfetish
Thank you, I love hearing feedback, positive or not. That's sort of the reason I made this; the fact I couldn't find many good ones anywhere. There may be some sort of 'sequel', though it probably won't explain what traumatized her. I don't think I would be able to put into words the emotions she felt while watching her parents die and I feel the more mystery, the more you can imagine what happened, create your own little story inside a story.
