Your book is interesting ! The way you explain the scenery, feelings, life and the dialogue is very amazing ! I respect you for that. Just an advice, for the beginning chapters are the first impression reader to the whole book. You need to put more tension or anything that will attract your book. It is already awesome beginning just need to put a bit effort. The words in one chapter is pretty long how great you can pour your idea that much I'm jealous T^T About the cover, maybe I can make one for you ! Last but not least, keep up your work you have your readers' full support <33