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Just some feedback here: I have been reading 'Changing', and it is a bit difficult to discern between different points of view. I'll find myself reading and suddenly realize that it seemed to have switched to a different pov multiple paragraphs earlier. I recommend putting a distinction between povs to counteract that. I know that you have discontinued 'Changing', but I thought giving some input where you could improve on future stories would be helpful.