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As a way to make up to my dear readers who are upset about my discontinuation of my fanfic 'Changing' I will pour in every single blood, sweat and tears into every word and letter I type into my future other fanfictions. 

_M416_

Just some feedback here: 
          
          I have been reading 'Changing', and it is a bit difficult to discern between different points of view. 
          
          I'll find myself reading and suddenly realize that it seemed to have switched to a different pov multiple paragraphs earlier. I recommend putting a distinction between povs to counteract that.
          
          I know that you have discontinued 'Changing', but I thought giving some input where you could improve on future stories would be helpful.