imsointou

@PaintedLies Love yuue 2 Bitch <3
          	Paha.
          	
          	xx

12345z

um, I know I probably sound just like everyone else on your page but . . I was wondering if you could read my story? I'm in need of critisim and judging by ur discription of yourself, you dont seem like one to sugar-coat things :) Think you could help me out?

Rebecca07

may you please read one of my stories? i am trying to spread the word for my story My Paradise, but if that doesnt sound like something you would like, please check out one of my other stories:)
          thank you very much!
          -becca

iamyourego

Hi! :)
          
          I was wondering if you could read my story? Maybe even become a fan of me, vote for my chapters, or even comment? :)
          
          My story is called: "When You Need to Kill the King Of Demons It Should Be Easy, Right?"
          
          Description:
          
          Autumn Heart is one of the most skilled human assassins known to man. 
          
          She works for the biggest assassination organization worldwide in hopes of changing the world with every mission she completes. However, she is deprived of the opportunity to work on the more “important” jobs.
          
           Killing demons.
          
          Just when she thought her life couldn’t become any duller, she’s offered the mission of a lifetime to end the war and commence peace between the two rivalling species.
          
          She needs to kill the king of demons: King Kael Alexander Aldridge.
          
          Strongly attracted to Kael, she soon learns he possess a terrible hostile, flirtatious personality and particularly loathes humans, and begins to grow a strong disgust toward him.
          
          Not allowing anyone to get close to her due to her dark past, fearing she may be betrayed once again, Kael becomes suspicious and digs into her personal life, finding out things that bring her to tears.
          
          Will she realize the flaws within her own species? Herself? Or will she remain the dark, cold person she was when she arrived at the Aldridge castle?
          
          She can change the world.
          
          It will only take one silver bullet.
          
          Should be easy, right?
          
          Xoxoxoxojfkhsdj, NotJustRainbows :)

Aetila

Hey there! 
          If you've got some extra, bored, time; I was wondering if you could read one of my stori es and comment on it! (voting , fanning, and whatever are all optional, its the reviews I need!) I'd love to return the favor, and I will! 
          I know this might annoy you, but anything is greatly appreciated! Thanks for reading this! 
          -Celeste 
          My Stories--Golden Dawn; Karis Gebelin was just your typical Hawaii transplant to Manhattan, obsessive top student who actually procrastinates everything, and bound of Ivy; future careerist and current fortune teller. Until-- that is--she finds out everything she aced is more or less a ben trevato-- so good bye model student and striving socialite--and hello demons layer/alchemist and automatic industry tycoon--that is, if she survives. 
          
          Pride, Prestige, and The Undead-- When Aislinn LeBlanc went to boarding school, she expected to be working hard and standing out with her scholastic honors and economist talents in a sea of high-society spoiled brats in their opulent playground. Little did the senator's daughter know, however, that she was entering a world where your rich and famous can kill, slaughter, and hack things like no one's business. As it turn's out she's the useless kid that fades into the background in a truly elite establishment. Olympic fencers, kung-fu masters, fashion-hating, stockbroking supermodels, and the secrets of high society, and African mythology all come together in this tale of zombieslaying and prestige. 
          
          P.S. I know you get a lot of these, but I'll say it; I really don't think my main characters are Mary Sues & Gary Stus, they aren't gorgeous, extremely talented, maybe have one talent, but that's it. My stories also are not centered around one cliche relationship between two gorgeous people or whatever, and I really hope you can try comment! 
          Thank you for the time!

TeaKJayT

Holaa ! ^ ^
          I was wondering
          If you had the time can you check out one of my stories?
          o:
          Please and Thankk Yuu ! <3
          Would mean soo muchhhh to us !
          :D
          Ouu
          They are called Wait WHAT? I'm Married To WHO!?!?!
          Anddd ! ^ ^
          I'm a 17 year old girl...And someones out to get me...
          Tell me wahh yu think ! ^ ^
          Ohh and maybe vote?
          Thankkk Yuu ! For your time !
          <3

HollylLouisel94

Hey wud you mind reading my book - there is nothing - and maybe comment and vote? 
          or if you wud prefer reading a completed book then maybe - the maze -:: 
          
          The maze - 
          Grace Feraras is 15 and for two 
          years she has been waiting to 
          enter the cruellest, hardest and 
          most barbaric Survival 
          program ever. This year 
          she has that chance. 
          
          
          The 78th Officials have 
          begun and 10 teams of 10 
          set out into the unknown. 
          
          Only teenagers aged 13-17 
          are allowed to enter this 
          televised horror. 
          
          The winning team earns 
          Eternal glory and wealth, 
          but at what cost? 
          
          of course ill return the favour :) x

lovatic_

hey. 
          
          i was just wondering if u could take a look at my new story, Harewood crescent? it's about this girl who loves music and she goes on this music trip and falls in love with a guy called steve.But when tradgedy strikes she doesnt know if she really can fall in love with angel.... 
          so pleaz vote...comment? maybe become a fan??? 
          its only the first five chapters bt all my friends love it and say its really good. 
          i know these can get annoying bt its the only way i can get peeps to read it. These things dont stay on the whats new page for any long. thanks, Amy (: