includedisco

Hi allI've updated "for business or pleasure". Happy reading

BLKpopMelodyQueen

@includedisco,hey bro. Random thought: we shld really get a jd Series based from joongs characters pov. Like in all the previous series jd had, it was mostly base on dunks character pov.
          1) SIMM:we learned abt daonueas pov and how he felt abt khluen b4 we knew khluens story... N we only learnt abt khluens story when dao was ready to hear it... Like when dao learnt abt it, we did, not b4...
          2) Hidden Agenda: it's mostly based on zo's pov. We learn abt him, his insecurities and his feelings towards joke. But we only learnt abt joke, when zo does... Like, zo doesn't know abt joke, coz he never bothered to ask. He was rly busy/suffering with his own stuff to ask/even think abt joke, n joke never rly offered info abt it either... N that's why we only learnt abt jokes backstory in the last ep, coz that's when zo learnt abt it. 
          3)THK: I feel like this is a dual pov story... Coz we learn abt Fadel in the 1st ep and sometime in the middle, but otherwise it's mostly from styles pov. 
          4)DYTD: same, dual pov... But we don't rly know abt jades backstory... Ik it's not there in the book( I read the book), but we know abt kamins backstory... N I don't rly remember, but i don't think they mentioned why jade wanted to become a police officer or what happened to his parents... They only mentioned he wanted to be in special forces(if memory serves me right)... 
          5) How to love my billionaire ceo: this also seems like it's from dunks characters pov... (Based on pilot trailer...) Also it seems like this ceo x office worker stories... 
          Soo... My point basically is, we need a story that starts with joongs character intro and that begins from his pov... Wdyt?...

BLKpopMelodyQueen

@includedisco ,that makes more sense of you look at it from that perspective... 
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includedisco

@BLKpopMelodyQueen I agree with everything you said here. It's usually the POV of Dunk's character. I think things will always be that way. In straight romance novels, series or movies, you'll notice that it's always the girl's POV because it's always the girl's story. I think in BL it's the same concept. The story tends to revolve around the "bottom" and thus it'll always be his pov. It's an age old formular that I doubt will ever be challenged. It would be refreshing to see something different though
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BLKpopMelodyQueen

Hloo my broo... How are you!!? I wanna tell you something new abt my life: I got inspo for 2 new aus. 1 standalone and 1 duology!!! Plus my exams end tmrw...well my boards...I still have competitive exams but... Still I'm writing 3 books parallelly and it's sooo much funnnnn.... I wanted to tell u this coz u helped me get out of my shell to write... Thx for that, my bro!!! 

BLKpopMelodyQueen

@includedisco will do... Follow me back, just realised u didn't b4 bro... 
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includedisco

@BLKpopMelodyQueen That's amazing news, bro. can't wait. so proud of you already. I forget things, so please remind me again when you post:)
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BLKpopMelodyQueen

@includedisco ,Ima upload the books this Saturday bro.. on the 21st...
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Lochi__

Lochi__

@includedisco *blushing* I'm happy to know that you liked it!  I'll read it over again until you publish the next chapter :) ❤️
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includedisco

@Lochi__  aaaaaaaahhhhhh omg I'm getting a little emotional here. Seriously. I didn't expect this gift at all, especially not for my beloved little story. Obviously you love this one more than I do thank you so, so, so much I love it. Your choice of pics captures their energy perfectly in the story. Joong sexy and a bit cocky. Dunk handsome cute and sweet looking. And guess what, the poster has inspired another chapter  so thanks again
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Lochi__

Here's a lil gift for you!
          
          https://pin.it/4L2eOysyb
          
          HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!

Lochi__

@includedisco I made this one like months ago! Back then I could'nt send this coz the app I used to enhance the features changed alot and results came looking like AI (ew). Im happy that you liked this *crying*.I'll do one for our boss baby and secretary couple too ❤
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includedisco

@Lochi__ This is so unexpected yet wonderful. Gosh I teared up a bit You have no idea how huge this cover is for me. It's a dream come true. Thank you so so much for bringing my story to the next level with this gift, and for taking time and care doing this for me
            Me on my way to post it now and credit you‍♀️
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BLKpopMelodyQueen

Uhhh...Hi. I'm an avid reader of yours, for like the past 6-8 months... I guess.Do you write DunkJoong? I have a request for a DunkJoong book or oneshot or however you want to write it... I love ur writing btw. Pls reply if u wanna hear it. Thx

includedisco

@BLKpopMelodyQueen it's no bother at all. I'm happy to help. That's what writers community should be; to help, support and encourage each other. 
            Can't wait to read the story. 
            Happy writing
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BLKpopMelodyQueen

@includedisco ,It helps a lot!!! Thx for the advice... I was a bit scared as I said b4, but reading this gave me some courage. I got ur analogy abt the dolls and that helps me imagine the scenarios better... Thank you again for the advice. Hope I'm not bothering you with this... Thx for the website name as well!!! I'll tag u when I update it fully!! 
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BTSBLZONE

Hello!!!!
          You doing well??? I think Yes!!! 
          Nothing much, but I don't know any other way to contact you.. So here we gooo.... 
          So, I was reading beneath the bubbly today's chapter... Its beautiful and I'm glad you decided to stick to the theme as it was in the beginning. The one thing I wanna let you know is that you're an incredible writer... All your works I've read so far is good. But, what made me write this here is, i just wanna tell you that i miss the joongdunk in 'For business & Pleasure ". I still kinda wait for them. Though I'm reading other beautiful JD fiction... I miss them.. This is when I realise how you focus on characters instead of rushing the stories. I'm glad.. I came across you here!!!! Sending 
          

includedisco

@BTSBLZONE Hi!! Thanks for sending love and support here. It puts a smile on my face knowing that you like so many of my stories. It's a true blessing for real. I love writing and my only hope is to spread JD love with others through these stories. I understand you missing JD from FBOP. I miss them too if ever you have a request for an extra chapter, feel free to tell me. Any scene you wished to see or a scene you wished I wrote differently or what if this instead of that happened in the story. Anything. Fluffy, romantic, dramatic, smutty, etc. so far I'm working on the mpreg request which I combined with another request someone else made for happily ever after JD on the farm. Then I'll do a jealousy fluff and smut request someone else requested. I've only gotten 3 requests so far. I'll share these very soon. Thanks again for reaching out and letting me know of your love for my works. You're awesome 
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GoldKd_15

Hii
          You know what,  previously I was the one who used to feel bad whenever you posted about readers who used to post or passing bad comments about your fictions , but I never thought it would be me One day but reading others comments made me feel guilty amd villian like feeling as if I did something wrong,  I'm not good at using right and bold words to express what I m feeling exactly but I just want to say you I'm not less when it comes to support you and I like your way of writing a lot...and now I'm jealous too...sorry to disturb you again but I can't help myself ...don't bother to answer me please,  I don't want you to see you upset by any means...I'm sorry again 

Piiiu11111

Hiii
          Just wanted to check in, hehe... You've been pretty quiet recently and I was wondering if u were OK? If u are going thru a rough patch, I'm really sorry ur having to go thru that but it'll pass soon ryt? I realized lots of readers were being pretty negative abt ur recent DunkJoong ff; beneath the bubbly and I just wanted u to know: it is kinda difficult to understand Joong, not everyone can relate to it or have an experience similar to that but that's OK. Remember, u r ur own boss bitch, u CAN do what u want to, u CAN write what u want, U HAVE EVERY RIGHT TO DO SO. 
          Soooo... lemme know if ur OK if u can. Miss u, luv u and will always be a crazy reader of urs
          ❤️❤️❤️

includedisco

@Piiiu11111 this genuinly made me smile and laugh thanks again. sending you much love you're welcome to bombard me with cute headaches while I suffocate you with JD stories
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Piiiu11111

I'm fine girlie ❤️❤️ And well, I think this is the first time I've seen u THIS quiet, so I was kinda worried hehe. Hope ur problems will be OK soon and yh, ur a very very VERY loved boss bitch and I'm forever gonna be a headache for u... the good, cute kind LOL. Luv uuuuuuu
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includedisco

@Piiiu11111 hi. You're the second person to ask me so so I'm really wondering aren't I usually quiet unless I post fanfics?
            Anyway thank you for checking up on me. I haven't been okay due to some personal matters and also some frustrations in my writing but I will be okay. Because yes I'm a well loved boss bitch that means a lot to me. Thank you. Love you too❤️How are you doing?
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GoldKd_15

Hiii
          I am really sorry for what happened there, I never wanted that to happen, Something in her  comment triggered me and I reacted like that, I know it shouldn't happened at first place and I'm sorry that it upsets you this that much that you had to intervened,  I promise it wouldn't happen again.  Hope you're not angry at me...

GoldKd_15

@includedisco I have apologies to her too  
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GoldKd_15

@includedisco Omg I'm so so sorry...I'm feeling bad and ashamed that I made you feel like this and I don't know how to fix it, please forgive me... I never think ever to hurt you like this...but I already did , I'm so sorry.
            I promise no matter what I'll not reply any, ignore all, but please don't you ever think to delete it, its one of your best story too and I think everyone loves it too, please don't delete it from here and continue it as it is please please...
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includedisco

@GoldKd_15 the debate between you and that other person dis sour the writing experience for me but it's not just you two. There were more complaints from others. I don't know why the response here for the story was so negative when on ao3 the readers love it. I even considered deleting it from this platform and telling anyone who's following it to go read from ao3. After I edit, I'll decide whether update here or delete. Either way for now let's just move on and all try to keep things light and fun. It's just fanfics after all. Shouldn't be that serious
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