indecisxve

Ello!
          	Okay, so my last few stories have flopped due to writer's block and overall lack of motivation.
          	BUT!
          	I am determined to at least get a decent way into the one I've just published.
          	'No Good Deed' is a werewolf book, a genre that I have yet to tackle both on Wattpad and off of it. The first chapter is up, and I would /love/ some feedback.
          	I'm a little out of touch with werewolf lore, and I am taking some creative license. 
          	Yes, this story is going to fall into a few tropes. However I don't want it to fall into /too/ many tropes.
          	Anyways, now I'm just rambling. Please go read the first chapter!
          	With love,
          	Jade S. Yang

blossom495

Hi you updated Wanderer? I received notification of a chapter 11 but the content wasn't there, just a bunch of gibberish system language like there's a system error with Wattpad.

blossom495

@indecisxve clicked on the new notification.. Still not working I'm afraid :( no more gibberish but all the words are displayed vertically and there are like 297 pages.
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indecisxve

@blossom495 i did update Wanderer! I'll try republishing it, but if that doesn't work I'll make an author's note and try and talk to Wattpad Support.
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indecisxve

Ello!
          Okay, so my last few stories have flopped due to writer's block and overall lack of motivation.
          BUT!
          I am determined to at least get a decent way into the one I've just published.
          'No Good Deed' is a werewolf book, a genre that I have yet to tackle both on Wattpad and off of it. The first chapter is up, and I would /love/ some feedback.
          I'm a little out of touch with werewolf lore, and I am taking some creative license. 
          Yes, this story is going to fall into a few tropes. However I don't want it to fall into /too/ many tropes.
          Anyways, now I'm just rambling. Please go read the first chapter!
          With love,
          Jade S. Yang

indecisxve

Ello there!
          If anyone would like to edit 'Clarity' for me, please email me at jadeyangs@gmail.com!
          You must have Google Docs (that's where all the chapters are)
          And you must be nice... Otherwise that's it! Also please have better grammar then me. In your email please use good grammar, because if you don't I simply won't respond. I know that makes me sound really rude but if your grammar is obviously worse then mine (Not saying that mine is impeccable... It's not) then I won't be answering your email.
          Thank you!
          - JY

indecisxve

Hey there everyone!
          So, I have obviously been absent from the writing scene, that's a given. I wasn't in the right place, and I had no inspiration.
          Now I do.
          I have an almost 3000 word first chapter of a thing I'm working on and a multitude of other documents that have something to do with this book I'm planning. When I get farther ahead in it and I'm sure that I will stick with it, perhaps I'll post it.
          Right now, I'm looking for an editor/beta reader.
          Something to give me constructive criticism and present ideas and other things to me. You would most definitely be credited if I publish it onto here, not even a question in my mind. I'm also looking for a friend, someone to complain to when things go wrong in my personal life. I'd share with you every single document relating to this book (possibly series, not that far yet) and ask for a lot of input. Also, someone with impeccable grammar because mine IS NOT. I'm going into eighth grade in the fall, I am literally 13. I know that my grammar is above average for my age, but it's definitely not perfect.
          They'd have to be dedicated, I obviously don't expect immediate response but rather within 12-18 hours unless there's something personal going on in their life, which I would appreciate if they would give a heads up on those sorts of things.
          I'm also willing to be a beta reader/editor/confidante for anyone else! I have two days of school left, so I'll have a lot of free time on my hands. I'm trying to consume it with massive amounts of writing whoops.
          PM if interested, or if you just want to talk!
          - Jadeeeeeeee

indecisxve

Oh, and it anyone is willing to make me a cover, that would be heavily appreciated. I'd share with you the necessary documents and information, of course!
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indecisxve

hellooooooooooo
          it's halo! i've gotten back into writing now after a very very long hiatus. i've just been lacking inspiration and motivation, but both have just hit me now.
          i've already published the first few chapters of my new book, 'masquerade.' please go read it! if you don't, that's a-okay but if you do i will love you forever
          happy late new years!
          - halo