indesignic

Hi all! After a bit of time off, I've gone ahead and posted 2 new chapters of Return of the Hero. Thank you so much for your patience, and I hope you enjoy reading Raina's story as much as I do. New updates for my other stories are coming soon as well, so keep an eye out!

Dead_Of_Winter

What is the significance of Sophie’s necklace??

indesignic

@Dead_Of_Winter Unfortunately, I wasn't able to include the plotline about her necklace in my first draft.  I'll be revisiting this in the sequel and when I complete the 2nd draft of Hooked -- Sophie's necklace will be more significant in the rewrite!
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indesignic

Hi all! After a bit of time off, I've gone ahead and posted 2 new chapters of Return of the Hero. Thank you so much for your patience, and I hope you enjoy reading Raina's story as much as I do. New updates for my other stories are coming soon as well, so keep an eye out!

xxinvisigirlxx

Hi, 
          I hope you’re doing well, just wanted to know if you’re going to continue writing Raina’s story, I’m intrigued and need answers 
          Thanks

xxinvisigirlxx

Yay!!!  that’s great to hear!! Can’t wait for the updates
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indesignic

@xxinvisigirlxx  I am! Editing is taking its sweet time, but more chapters are coming!
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iamjeselg

Hi nic! Im starting to like the hooked story but after i read chapter 20 and so on i'm having a hard time understanding the story. I can't follow where it was going. There is some chapters that i think should be address and not leave it hanging.

indesignic

@Ceeeela I agree! I wrote that story quite some time ago, and I have plans to edit it and smooth out some scenes, plot points, etc. Thank you for letting me know and for reading!
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eminatonette

Hooked was a great story. The first few chapters were done well, the pacing as it progresses needs more edge to it. Needs more flavor and spice but overall was a great read. I've only read a few mer stories and this one has a lot of potential. I enjoyed it. Keep on writing and may God bless u...

eminatonette

@indesignic it's my pleasure. I would love to read more of ur creations. Thank u for sharing ur talent. The reason why I've only read a few Mer stories is bcoz I don't usually get past 2 chapters. Writing takes a lot of imagination, research and talent. I know it's especially hard in this kind of genre when u base everything with myths, stories and ur sole imagination to spun ur tale.
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indesignic

@eminatonette I completely agree. I wrote that story a while ago and would love to go back to edit and rewrite certain parts. It's on my list of things to do! Thank you so much for reading.
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