indistop96

@cookielove_o8 No problem, i really do like your story though, and if u want, i can tell all my friends/fans on wattpad to read it and give you constructive criticism!
          	
          	whoops, i accidentally put a comment on my own page, instead of replying to yours!! I'm such a ditz!!!

Aetila

Hey there! 
          I'm new to Watt pad, and I was wondering if yo u could read one of my stories and comment on it! (voting, f anning, and whatever are all o ptional, its the reviews I nee d!) I'd love to return the fav or, and I will! 
          I know this mig ht annoy you, but anything is greatly appreciated! Thanks fo r reading this! 
          -Celeste 
          My Stories--Gol den Dawn; Karis Gebelin was ju st your typical Hawaii transpl ant to Manhattan, obsessive to p student who actually procras tinates everything, and bound of Ivy; future careerist and c urrent fortune teller. Until-- that is--she finds out everyth ing she aced is more or less a ben trevato--so goodbye model student and striving socialit e--and hello demonslayer/alche mist and automatic industry ty coon--that is, if she survives. 
          
          Elven Mob Bosse s and Rebel Heirs--Welcome to a world where elves,well, aren 't your fairy tale elves. Rule d in a ochlocracy, of Oligarch s and tech savvy megacorporati ons, of underworld criminal ru le, resistance in this mobocra cy is futile when your King ca n be your dishwasher in one da y. Intergalactic bestseller an d future Oligarch, Kronos fød t av Mørke’skala soon finds out how his fickle world migh t change--with his help too.

serval

Hey, I know the­­­­­­­­se are super ann­oy­in­g,­ a­nd­ I­'m­ not gonna beg
          But I have this story called
          'An Albino On A­­­­­­­­ Reality Show.. ­Wh­at­ c­ould go wrong?'
          that I was hopi­­­­­­­­ng you could tak­e ­a ­lo­ok­ a­t ­an­d ­give­ my ­some feedback!
          Thanks, I know ­­­­­­­­these get annoying!
          (:

SyerraJaneXoXoX

Hey! If you have any spare time do you think you could give one of my storys a look! If you cant then I completely understand:) 
          Umm the names of my storys are...
          "Mysterys of the Night" and "Love Shake, and Broken"
          Maybe comment and vote? constructive critizism is welcom:D
          Thanks!
          
          <3 Syerra

marthe3103

Sam is a lying bitch of an asshole. he cheats on her cuz well the obious, she won't have sex with him, she barly kiss him. but i feel kinda bad for Ciale she was beginning to like him. not love, like.
          
          but she'll ----- i can't tell you more than this. sorr, but it will soon  be up another chapter. remember to vote ont them to.
          
          thanks a bunch.