U sound lke a good writer so ill have a look at ur books :D hey ur 14 like me only im from australia :) please read my story that would b cool
My first story - 'One Way or Another'
"My name is Olivia Martin. I was born on the 14th of April. I moved schools. It was hard at first, but I made friends. But then after that day in class, it's wasn't the hardest thing - in fact, it made everything change. But I had two choices in who to trust: to believe my best friend, or to believe my crush. I made the wrong choice. And it could kill me because of it. One way or another."
http://www.wattpad.com/story/3686888-one-way-or-another
Have a fab day!