Hi! You are a wonderful writer. Have voted on ‘Pretending’ that’s has been in the ‘Damie/Jakota’ reading list for months! Thanks for adding # LoveScenes to your reading list. Enjoy the dangerously sexy read ;)
Here’s a small selection of wattpad reader comments ;)
“This chapter gave me shivers!! Wonderfully crafted chapter. The childhood insight for Dakota gives a heart to this story...I have read hundreds of different fandoms but never once any of that was this detailed and meticulous. You take real characters and real tidbits and spin them in such a way to make a riveting story... I wish it never ends....”
“The balance of the humor and Jamie's dark side is perfect in this story!”
“I just love, love and absolutely love how you project Jamie and Dakota's characters... Each line, each word, each phrase is dripping sensuality...”
“Ahhhhhh the suspense!!!! I love it!!”
“Omg the anticipation is killin me!!!! I wonder what her answer will be!!!!!AMAZING chapter btw<3”
Fantastic. you write seamlessly and really captured the essence of their being. Very thorough and descriptive. Very realistic too, surprisingly. That's the one thing I think is hardest about fan fiction. Capturing the essence, the personality, behavior, traits of the characters. Nicely done, my friend.
“Omg I have no nails left I bit them all off reading this. I can't wait for the whole chapter to be posted.”
“WOW. ACTUALLY WOW. THIS CHAPTER WAS SERIOUSLY SOMETHING. INCREDIBLE. GLORIOUS. MAGNIFICIENT. Everything from start to finish was arousing, suffused in rich darkness. You capture both Jamie and Dakota's POVs so beautifully and accurately, I might as well had believed that they are your original characters...”
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