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titanically-
@abvthesky01 I'm glad you liked Loki! As my favorite character, I really tried to do a good job with him and I'm glad that that came through. XD As to Steve, I do agree with you. I kind of inwardly cringe when I read his parts. If I ever edit it, I'll probably do most editing to him and to Tasha (who I felt was a bit softer than she should be at some points). I'm also glad you liked Christina! Honestly, this was my first fanfiction, so it's nice to hear that people don't mind my OC as I know that some diehard members of the fandom don't appreciate OCs as much. It's somewhat a challenge to write one that people will be ok with, at least that's how I feel sometimes. Anyways, I'm really glad you liked the characters, and thanks a million for giving me your honest opinion on what I could do better on. :) I definitely agree with you when it comes to that. :D
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@dollopheads Even though I'm personally completely biased towards Loki, I have to say you did a good job with him. It's easy to write a tortured- soul cliché, but your Loki is pretty realistic. His relationship with Thor and Christina's relationship with Clint were done well too. One character that could be improved is Steve Rogers. I know that he's pining after the love that he and Peggy had, but he seems a bit too caught up in it to me. Oh, Christina is a breath of fresh air as a active, strong heroine who doesn't just let the story happen to her. +10 points for that :D You've made a follower out of me
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@abvthesky01 Aww, thanks! Out of curiosity, which character did you like the best? (Or, which character did you think I did the best writing for?) I only ask, because I'm curious. Some of them, I feel that I wasn't able to connect with as well, and I feel like that might be noticeable in the writing, so I was wondering which ones you thought I did best with, and which you thought could be improved. :)
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