@inlovejenna
BA9EE7 I LOVED YOUR BOOK SO MUCH, the details? the advanced vocabulary use? the plot? the pacing? the characters background stories? LITERALLY NO FLAWS; your book changed me as a person and i really hope you write more!!!
u also sound like a really cool person and we probably could be friends
dare i say this was so beautifully written? it conveys the right type of emotions, maybe thoughts that most of us had. the feelings, the rage the happiness all of that was described in ways i felt it.
i loved the book! i would suggest one thing tho make the male lead next time more traditional so it’s more realistic.
cause this made me start day dreaming and literally consider getting traditionally (arranged) married.
no need to thank me!!
but like i said i love the male lead, it’s just he lacked that saudi tradition and that’s what was what made me like spiral. so if you were to write another book potray the male lead as a more traditional man, to which then he softens up…it’s the perfect representation for how marriages are here.
i loved the book sm its one of my favs now, but its just that part it got me day dreaming in a way where honestly arranged marriage doesn’t sound that bad anymore
Dare i say your comment just made my day? TY truly from the bottom of my heart! I love your feedback and if you have anymore please do tell because this is only the first draft of my book which later on i plan to publish officially. TY AGAIN
5k+ are you kidding me?? Im so happy rn
Crying cuz i wanted my sister to help me edit my book and she didn’t even read it and called it bad…☹️
I came from tiktok. safe to say your writing intrigued me it's a well written story that made me open up to a culture I am not familiar with at all so yes I have learnt alot and enjoyed alot from your writing. It would be a loss to not convey that to you. You have written a good story.
Ty! Im really glad you enjoyed it and im really grateful. Feedback and criticism is important to me so feel free to tell me anything so I can improve book 1 and write a better book 2
Someone i know irl is about to read my story PRAY FOR ME
I read your story and I loved it so much (I finished it over the course of 3 days).Your writing style is so amazing and your word choice captures the character’s state of mind so precisely it’s creepy. I just wished there was more suspense in the story I wished the characters fought more and voiced out their emotions to each other more.
TY! I actually wished that to but if im being fr I wrote this when i was bored and wanted to test how my writing would manage and work with people. I’m actually working on a story rn that’s gonna be pretty deep. And im thinking about writing book 2 for Sara and Ryan
I get lonely a lot so i write stories. I have so much ideas and drafts but idk what to do with them
Please make more!! I’m currently reading “legally his” and it’s so cool to read a story set in my country and has the same culture