inlovejenna

5k+ are you kidding me?? Im so happy rn

keijiis

BA9EE7 I LOVED YOUR BOOK SO MUCH, the details? the advanced vocabulary use? the plot? the pacing? the characters background stories? LITERALLY NO FLAWS; your book changed me as a person and i really hope you write more!!!
          
          u also sound like a really cool person and we probably could be friends

inlovejenna

Sry I just saw this??? u kidding id love to be your friend
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leonspookiee

dare i say this was so beautifully written? it conveys the right type of emotions, maybe thoughts that most of us had. the feelings, the rage the happiness all of that was described in ways i felt it. 
          
          i loved the book! i would suggest one thing tho make the male lead next time more traditional so it’s more realistic. 
          
          cause this made me start day dreaming and literally consider getting traditionally (arranged) married.

leonspookiee

no need to thank me!! 
            
            but like i said i love the male lead, it’s just he lacked that saudi tradition and that’s what was what made me like spiral. so if you were to write another book potray the male lead as a more traditional man, to which then he softens up…it’s the perfect representation for how marriages are here. 
            
            i loved the book sm its one of my favs now, but its just that part it got me day dreaming in a way where honestly arranged marriage doesn’t sound that bad anymore
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inlovejenna

Dare i say your comment just made my day? TY truly from the bottom of my heart! I love your feedback and if you have anymore please do tell because this is only the first draft of my book which later on i plan to publish officially. TY AGAIN
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jikookie4f

I came from tiktok. safe to say your writing intrigued me it's a well written story that made me open up to a culture I am not familiar with at all so yes I have learnt alot and enjoyed alot from your writing. It would be a loss to not convey that to you. You have written a good story.

inlovejenna

Ty! Im really glad you enjoyed it and im really grateful. Feedback and criticism is important to me so feel free to tell me anything so I can improve book 1 and write a better book 2
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