DarkLadyAthara

Thanks for adding 'Haven' to your reading list! I hope you love it. Don't forget to leave some votes if you do and let me know what you think in the comments! 
          
          And if you're interested, be sure to check out the companion story, "The Ghost" for more Steve, Nat and even more Bucky! 
          
          Thanks again, and I’m excited to hear from you!! 
          
          Happy Reading!
          
          DLA

inoquire

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DarkLadyAthara

That's great! I'm so glad to hear it! I hope whatever else of mine you read, you love it just as much!
            
            Thanks again!
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inoquire

@DarkLadyAthara Started this morning and just finished it. It was fantastic! Love your writing and maybe look forwards to reading your other work.
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FlyingRedPanda

Thank you so much for voting on Mosaic!! I hope you are enjoying the story ^^

inoquire

No worries I'm always glad to share my opinion. I love how the story is progressing and seeing the small growths in each character, mostly Bucky since he's going through a bit of an identity crisis. 
            
            What I like about this storyline in particular is that there isn't an immediate attraction between the characters. You're fully fleshing out their progress from strangers to friends and getting to see how they slowly grow to understand and care for one another. 
            
            One thing that could be improved is having more chapters up haha. But in all honesty I've enjoyed everything there is so far.
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FlyingRedPanda

Thank you for letting me know how I'm doing and what you are getting from the characters ^^ 
            
            I kind of see it as using words to paint in somebody else's imagination and I'm like "I'M GOING FOR A DOG!!! DID THAT COME THROUGH? OR DID IT END UP AS A CHAIR???" (Doesn't help that I couldn't read properly as a kid... jumbled everything and ended up with a totally different story... so it could happen with my writing. So I'm always curious with how other people find the story ^^ also always fun when they see something else that I never noticed or thought about ^^)
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inoquire

@FlyingRedPanda I love the writing style. You keep leaving author notes about how you're trying to portray the characters properly... And you're doing an AMAZING job of that. I really get the feeling of Bucky feeling conflicted and lost, wanting to be and stay with Val but not knowing what that feeling is. And Val is just such a relatable character. Keep up the good work with whatever you're writing!
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