inspiredbooklover_98

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rlp7xpI4U2k
          	
          	If this is remotely interesting to you, please let me know... :)
          	Enjoy! :)

Oceanablue

To be hones I liked the story but it kinda seems cliché, now if you were to add a twist to the story I would definitely read it!! The idea is good but maybe you might want to add something extra, a twist!
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inspiredbooklover_98

@Oceanablue It also has a lot of typos. I made this last year for a story that I really want to bring back but I don't have the motivation for it or something. Does the trailer seem intriguing enough for you that you might want to read the story if I were to post it???
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Oceanablue

It's good! Kinda fast so I had to keep pausing at one or two parts but other than that it's good!
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inspiredbooklover_98

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rlp7xpI4U2k
          
          If this is remotely interesting to you, please let me know... :)
          Enjoy! :)

Oceanablue

To be hones I liked the story but it kinda seems cliché, now if you were to add a twist to the story I would definitely read it!! The idea is good but maybe you might want to add something extra, a twist!
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inspiredbooklover_98

@Oceanablue It also has a lot of typos. I made this last year for a story that I really want to bring back but I don't have the motivation for it or something. Does the trailer seem intriguing enough for you that you might want to read the story if I were to post it???
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Oceanablue

It's good! Kinda fast so I had to keep pausing at one or two parts but other than that it's good!
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inspiredbooklover_98

http://www.protagonize.com/story/passage--im-not-leaving-you ANOTHER PASSAGE HAS BEEN POSTED ON MY PROTAGONIZE PAGE, CHECK IT OUT!!!

inspiredbooklover_98

@Oceanablue I understand, especially since it wasn't in context...
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Oceanablue

It's good but I'm kinda confused as to what is going on... other that that it was good.
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inspiredbooklover_98

http://www.protagonize.com/story/passage--better-dreams
          Check out this passage for a novel I'm working on!!!!!!

Oceanablue

Your welcome!
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inspiredbooklover_98

@Oceanablue Thanks so much! It is a work in progress, so I don't have a full story laid out, but I do have a few more passages I may put on Protagonize in the future, and when I do I'll be sure to put the link up here. Thank you for reading that, though! :)
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Oceanablue

It's good! I want to read more about Thad and Hachter and Cory!
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inspiredbooklover_98

I UPDATED AND I'M PRETTY SURE THERE HAS BEEN NOT EVEN ONE READ IN THAT TIME. PLEASE READ IT!!!! <3 :)

Oceanablue

When I found out I just HAD to! LOL, I'm obsessed... :/
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inspiredbooklover_98

@Oceanablue That's so weird!!! I'm glad that you did read and vote though! :))))
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Oceanablue

I didn't even get a notice!!!! What In The World!!!!
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